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ophelia_crane
16 November 2009 @ 07:22 am
So I am officially 29,031 words in 42 pages...over half-way...now. Otherwise I will just have this 42 pages of...something that is not a novel and is not a short story so I have to finish it! It is the longest thing I have ever written having surpassed my thesis paper by ten pages now. So there! Ok, now that I am finished with my mental pep talk I can get on with this entry.

I am really enjoying writing this thing to the point of being a little scared. I have no idea where it is going beyond my simple outline that says "they find Dr. Fromme." or "they hear Lady Greystill's story" [Do I know what her story is--not yet!] and I think that is what has been missing from my writing, even my playwriting: that sense of adventure and going along for the ride. I have gotten too tied up in the beginning and outlining of it all which has stagnated it. Perhaps there is still time to save Children of Destiny...or perhaps it will just be a casualty of self-teaching oneself to write....

I think a big part of it is that I have finally come to understand what it means to re-write and that it doesn't have to be perfect the first time, and with that weight off my shoulders I can...just write. Which is very freeing...and has almost led me to think I might like being a writer as a career [She who hasn't finished a novel let alone publish one] but for some reason I think I can do it! I enjoy storytelling too much not to find some way to make it successful.

So now with Carter in lap and cup of coffee in hand I am going to dive back in and see where the characters take me today!

Wish me luck!
 
 
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ophelia_crane
09 November 2009 @ 07:30 am
So I am really bad about updating!  But life has been a little crazy AND I decided to go for Nano Wrimo again this year, and actually win--since I failed miserably last year...

17,103 words and still going!!! Even survived tech week for my show with my word count and sanity in tact! Still got a lot more to go but I am feeling good! I probably won't post any of the story until after November just because I tend to jump around and fix things and add stuff and...it would just drive me crazy!

Also have two art shows in December fairly back to back December 3rd is the Manuel's Tavern Art Show that I am assistanting with and the second is the Christmas at the Creek. I have a lot of furniture to paint and will hopefully sell it all!

Wish me luck!  Back to writing I go!
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ophelia_crane
03 October 2009 @ 02:24 pm
1. I can't really remember where exactly I came up with the name because it was forever ago, but I think she started out as a role playing character based off of Gwen Stefani.  Originally she spelled her name Wren Stefani.  Over time as she became incorporated into my novel Children of Destiny  she became French [well her adoptive parents were French/Italian anyways) and so the spelling changed to Rennes.  She doesn't know what her real name is as she was named when she was found on the doorstep by her adoptive parents. [Classic orphan story I know!]

2.  The character Rennes came into being because I had already created Luna, who was the wild and impulsive one and music based, and Willow the theatre artists, writer and director and I needed a balancing factor for the two characters, which is where Rennes fits in in the group of friends.  She is quiet, studious and fact based.  In the group of three she is the motherly figure always looking after Luna and Willow in ways sometimes even they don't realize.

3. Rennes character changed as the story progressed and became clearer in my mind and became more of a melancholy figure.  She is the side of orphanhood [as all the main characters are orphans] that holds a lot in.  This was completely differentf from the RP character Wren Stefani, who was bouncier and a lot more weird.  Rennes also chaged  in that she slowly became more of a key figure in discovering the Prophecy that plays a main part in the story, as well as implementing it.  She is also involved in a bitter sweet love affair and began speaking more actual French.

4. For fun Rennes enjoys writing history papers and performing DNA tests [this is very important to the story actually as it is how all the main characters discover  they are essentially half-breeds!] She likes to listen to heavy metal and industrial techno because she says the heavy beats help drown out the world and help her concentrate.  Rennes has a slight French accent and speaks French with Willow much to Luna's aggravation. 
 
 
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ophelia_crane
08 September 2009 @ 04:36 pm
 This article from Writers Digest.com was completely written for me!

Read the wisdom that lies therein...


 9 Tips for Overcoming Too Many Ideas Syndrome
March 13, 2008
by  Leigh Anne Jasheway-Bryant
Some writers sit down in front of a blank computer screen and hope for inspiration to hit them out of the blue. Others have the opposite problem, with ideas for plot twists, article topics, greeting card taglines and even song lyrics buzzing incessantly in their heads. In fact, when I asked 10 writers if they considered themselves sufferers of Too Many Ideas Syndrome (TMIS), the answer from all was a resounding "Yes."

TMIS may not seem much of a problem, especially in an occupation that requires new ideas popping up regularly in order to drive creativity. But having too many ideas and no focus can be just as debilitating to a writer as staring at nothingness, especially if the syndrome causes indecision, procrastination, failure to meet deadlines, insomnia and anxiety. You don't hear much about TMIS because complaining about being too creative is like complaining about being on The New York Times bestseller list too often.

Imagine standing in the cereal aisle at the grocery store facing dozens of different breakfast options, trying to decide which one to buy. Should you go for the oat squares to reduce your cholesterol, even though you're fairly certain they'll taste like pine needles? Something with lots of sugar and a cartoon character on the box to remind you of your childhood? The bran flakes to keep you regular? There are so many choices and all of them seem good.

For many writers, that's what it feels like every time they try to put words on a page. I know. I suffer from TMIS. At this very moment, my desk is covered with four freelance article ideas, a book outline, two greeting card projects and applications for seven writing competitions. Not to mention a list of baby names I'm using to try to name the characters in the musical I promised myself I'd finish soon.

Melissa Hart, author of The Assault of Laughter, says she's been plagued with TMIS since she was 10 and her mother taught her how to write and submit a short story for publication. "Ever since then, my mind has been besieged with ideas for stories, novels, poems, magazine articles, op/ed pieces and children's books. I wake up in the middle of the night with my head spinning. Sometimes I wish I'd chosen a more sensible career—like plumbing."

There are strategies for coping with TMIS, and they aren't as drastic as leaving the writing life for the snaking-the-drain life. Here are nine that may help you:

1. THE RED DRESS THEORY.
 I've been teaching this theory to my comedy-writing students for years. It's based on the premise that at any party, there will be more women wearing black dresses than red ones—the red ones stand out and get attention. When faced with an overwhelming number of ideas, I try to evaluate them to see which one seems most like a red dress in a sea of black. For me, bold, brash ideas are almost always the ones that inspire and motivate me.

2. IT'S THE STUPID IDEA, STUPID. 
Tim Bete enjoys pursuing what he calls his stupid ideas. "My new book, Guide to Pirate Parenting, was the stupidest idea I ever had for a book," he says. "But as the idea evolved, it became one of the best ideas. It just needed time to age. Time lets things percolate. If you keep thinking about a stupid idea over a long period of time, it may get legs—or, in my case, peg legs." He may have a point. My bestselling book to date is Bedtime Stories for Dogs. That's right—stories for dogs. Talk about crazy.

3. THIS IDEA HAS LEGS. Another way I deal with TMIS is to take my dogs for a walk. Not only do I think better on the move, but once I get away from the jumble of paper piled on my desk, things become clearer. I always carry a tape recorder so I can record ideas as I move. When I get back, whatever ideas I've been excited enough to talk about are those I'll pursue first. Hart tucks a pen into her ponytail when she goes running so she can write good ideas on her hand while bad ideas fall by the wayside.

4. THE ASSIGNMENT IS DUE. Even if you don't have a deadline, make one up. Too much time often exacerbates confusion and indecisiveness, especially when you're faced with too many ideas. I've taught five-minute writing exercises in my classes for years and found they produce highly creative writing. Bete has similar advice: "Reduce the amount of time you have to write because less time means less wasted time on unproductive ideas."

5. MIND OVER MIND. Many of the writers I spoke with rely heavily on their own imagination to cure TMIS. Susan Reinhardt, author of Don't Sleep with a Bubba, thinks of her writing life as a garden. "I try to decide which of my ideas should be yanked out before they even make it to the page," she says. Award-winning screenwriter Cynthia Whitcomb, who has sold 70 screenplays and seen 29 come to the screen, puts on a chef's hat instead. Her advice: "Think of your ideas like pots on the stove in the kitchen of your creative mind. Lift the lids and look inside. One of them is always closest to being soup. Write that one first."

6. GIVE IN TO PASSION. Many authors, especially nonfiction writers, gravitate to ideas about which they have the most passion. Dr. Christiane Northrup, author of bestselling women's health books including her latest, Mother-Daughter Wisdom, says, "I go with the idea that brings me the most pleasure or has the most juice. For example, if I have to choose between writing about osteoporosis or writing about sex, I'm going to go with sex! But I also like to tackle subjects that bring up the crusader in me. I recently wrote about the HPV vaccine and why most women don't need it."

Wendy Maltz, a sex therapist who has written a number of self-help books, including The Sexual Healing Journey, says she writes only about things she feels passionate about. "I don't even like writing, but I get all these ideas and writing is the best way to have the biggest social impact. I write out of a need to help, so I choose ideas that will benefit the most people and about which there is the least information available."

7. ORGANIZE VISUALLY. Hart takes a very visual and organized approach to sorting through her ideas. "I'm a big fan of the bulletin-board approach. I have a huge board in my office. It helps me to be able to see my various projects. I can't visualize computer files." Many writers are highly visual and this approach can help a lot, especially if you color-code the cards pinned to your board.

8. GET (META) PHYSICAL. Dr. Northrup uses another kind of card to help her sort through her many ideas for projects. "I often make decisions using the Motherpeace Tarot card deck. Before cutting the cards, I ask for guidance. There's no magic in these cards; they're an intuition tool and help me get in touch with what my intuition is trying to tell me."

9. THAT'S WHAT FRIENDS ARE FOR. Every writer needs a network of friends she can bounce ideas off of comfortably. There's no quicker way to jettison a few ideas than pitching them to friends and have them give you that stare that says, "What else have you got?" Over the years, I've belonged to several writers' groups but find I usually go back to the same three or four people for advice. I trust them to tell me the truth and help me sort good ideas from bad.

If you have TMIS, you don't have to suffer in silence. You can use one or more of these ideas (yes, I realize the oxymoron in presenting an idea person with more ideas). I hope you'll get relief quickly. If not, my only other advice is to choose the sugary cereal with the toy in it. 
 
 
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ophelia_crane
31 August 2009 @ 07:40 pm
...Or Why I like Captain Hook.

Captain Hook is one of those literary characters that wether or not you like him you know him.  He is the quintessential villain of a childhood story.  On the surface he is suave, elegant, and ruthless all at the same time.  However, there is more underneath that "handsome countenance" and "elegance of diction" than meets the eye, in my opinion.  That is one of several reasons why I like Captain Hook.  In addition to those external qualities James Hook represents everything that is opposite of Peter Pan.  Where Peter is the child who never grows up Hook is the representative of what can happen when you grow up because "All grownups are pirates." As well as being a symbol of the child who was forced to grow up too soon.  Therefore he resents what he can never have again, the joy of youth. This give motivation to his villainous ways and makes him, to me, more of a tragic figure. The idea of growing up too soon is something I  can relate to metaphorically, not literally [the psychology of birth order will come later!]

Captain Hook is a pirate.  That in and of itself makes him interesting to me because as we know, I enjoy most things piratical.  However, he is not just a pirate.  He is an eloquent, educated, elegant pirate in manner and style who won't hesitate to gut you if you stand in his way.  Refined and ruthless at the same time.  I like it when characters are full of opposites.  It is the kind of characters I strive to create in my own works.  Captain Hook is also interesting to me because we are opposites.  He lives on the Jolly Roger, loots, plunders, frightens the bajeebus out of people [and yes I know my name is the Dread Pirate Lainey but I think by comparison I am pretty nice]  and well, chases and kills children.  I am...well, me.  I'll admit when you write it out "chases and kills children" it sounds rather gruesome, but on the flip side the children "chase and kill pirates"  so I guess you could say the brats had it coming.  I feel that there must be more to his character than just that.  Barrie was too good a writer than to leave it at just that.  Even though he wasn't in the first drafts of the play I think he came about for a reason other than to fill time while a set change happened.  People are enemies for the basic reason that they believe or represent opposite ideals.  Therefore if Peter Pan represents the innocent joy of childhood then it is only logical that Captain Hook be "old, alone, and done for" and because of it wan to kill what he is not and can never have again.  Barrie gives the readers hints of this without dictating too much [it's not his story after all] which just makes him that much more interesting.

 In a world of characters whose goals and stories are more easily defined because they are children he is the "dark figure" that is never fully explained and that is a good metaphor for life.  In childhood, things are easier more easily explained, and once you grow up things become hints of things rather than full answers.  And well, it never hurts to have your character played by Jason Isaacs.  The subtlety  of her performance gives a sense sadness masked by anger which seems be Hook's personality [and his "handsome countenance" doesn't hurt either!] .  If he is so worried about Peter forgetting him who else may have forgotten him?  And then he turns ruthless again and uses it to his advantage!  I feel like I have talked in circles about this but I think I have covered all of my reasons for liking the character Captain Hook...and in the immortal words..."Split my infinitives!"
 
 
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ophelia_crane
26 August 2009 @ 12:02 am
 ...and another to go!

Just finished my re-write of Act I of The True History of Henry Rayne and the Airship Pirates!  I sent it off for feedback, and in the mean time I have been outlining Act II-the one that needs a lot of work!  Namely making some characters disappear [making sure some of the actually have characters!] and a whole mishmash of re-arranging scenes and streamlining to make it flow [and not be three acts long!]

ACT II BREAKDOWN [I wish writing the actual script were this easy!]        Subject to change.

Prologue
- Henry journal entry

Ac2-Sc1  Blackpool Castle
- Fioni explains Morgenstern's plan to Illira
- Vin says MN has captured Spencer
- Illira talks to Vin

Ac2-Sc2   East Wing of Mercantile Prison [a day later]
- Aicilla and Spencer talk, Aicilla tries to get Spencer to do something, but she's given up

Ac2-Sc3   Mn Headquarters/Steamgear Tavern
- Henry goes to Urich for help
- Urich is bound up by the rules, Henry proposes going outside of the rules Urich disagrees
- Henry gets frustrated goes to Steamgear Tavern, flips out
- Penthrift begins telling story of Spencer/Fioni

Ac2-Sc4   Blackpool Castle [pg 55 of typed script]
- Fioni/Vin/Illira
- Vin tells Illira what happend to Spencer

Ac2-Sc5  Steamgear Tavern
- Penthrift finishes story
- Henry decides not to give up rescuing Illira
- Penthrift decides to go with him
- Henry decides he needs the crew and will go break them out

Ac2-Sc6 East Wing
- Henry rescues the crew
- Morgenstern writes to Fioni that he is coming to visit to make sure all is going well [doesn't trust Fioni!]

Ac2-Sc7 Blackpool Castle   [Big ol' honkin' scene of doooom!]
- Vin/Illira [find Fioni's stash of gold that he had been hiding from the crew]
- Henry and crew enter
- Illira tricks Fioni so Spencer and crew can try to escape
- Swordfight commences [with witty banter]
- Vin saves Spencer, dies
- Spencer/Fioni duel
- Aicilla stops Spencer from killing Fioni, saves her when he pulls a knife
- Spencer kills Fioni

Ac2-Sc8 Blackpool Castle
- Urich enters
- the find Morgenstern/letters/Illira explains their plan
- apologies are exchanged all around
- Illira tells Urich no
- Spencer pays off Penthrift with Fioni's gold and gives extra ship to Illira and Henry
- Henry finally kisses Illira while Aicilla and Spencer go get coffee/rum

The end!

It seems like a lot to squish into 40 pages but quite a few of those scenes are very short [not the last to obviously!] and it still may get re-arranged a bit more.   It's a start!  Or a second half rather!  

It feels good to at least get it outlined now the OCD writer in me can go away for awhile so I can percolate on how to make Vin less emo and still make sense!  But for now, some Steven Brust and sleeeeeep!



 
 
ophelia_crane
10 August 2009 @ 09:56 am
So I just finished meeting with my good friend and dear associate, Aicilla [names have been changed to protect the innocent, and not so innocent!]  and we worked out the beginnings of our silly little writing project The Wondrous Escapades of Lord Peterbrooke and his Man Quincy which can be found here  

Does it serve a really purpose other than for our own amusement? Probably not.

Are we having fun with it? Hells yah, when we are awake and coherent anyways [no more Monday meetings, we decided!]

So now my writing tasks include finishing the Ultraman Sorta script for Jared [piece of cake!] and creating a world in which the Spainish never conquered the Aztecs, and chocolate is brought to the Victorian age by an adventurous British nobleman, his butler and a very unique airship!

[Oh yeah, and finish Henry Rayne and the Airship Pirates!  That is an ongoing task!]

Now...more coffee and errands to run!
 
 
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Current Mood: hopeful
Current Music: noises of the cafe...
 
 
ophelia_crane
07 August 2009 @ 09:26 am
...for the coffee to kick in.  

I am still plugging away at Henry Rayne and the Airship Pirates, trying to work the kink out of my neck and am waiting for the coffee to kick in, so I can go paint today...

Crunch time on a lot of different projects has hit me like a metric ton of railroad ties and instead of being able to buckle down and do it to it like I used to, my body has shut down.  I am not sleeping at all despite various usual and unusual medications and its taking everything I have to just be a human being.  However, I am working through it and am making progress on several projects writing and art oriented....

I cannot tell if this wonkiness is the Universe trying to tell me something or my brain, or Gizmo....I just know that while insomnia is a pain in the arse, it does lead to some interesting insights into storytelling and the creative arts...

Now to shower and go paint, and make art for a while.

It's Kalin's first day teaching, "times they are a'changin'" 
 
 
Current Mood: discontent
Current Music: Ride by Chable and Bonicci
 
 
ophelia_crane
01 August 2009 @ 07:49 pm
So I am in the midst of creating maps of the world in which my novel Children of Destiny takes place. The first part that I am working on is Achelon City, and is where the bulk of the action of the story takes place. It is a gigantic city [about the size of two-three Atlantas] and is comprised of a mixture of humans from Earth [refugees after Earth was attacked] and indigenous peoples.

I am in the process of laying out the city and the streets and such and therefore need A LOT of names! Because it is a mixture of Earth culture and alien cultures I need everything from actual street names from large cities such as L.A. New York, London, Tokyo, Paris, etc; names of famous people, mythological names [Greek, Welsch, Japanese, Aboriginal, Egyptian anything] to random made up names that you think sound pretty. Anything and Everything! Feel free to either leave it as a message here or message or email them to me!

Thanks and as soon as I get everything finalized I will post the finished map! And then onto the next! Woot!
 
 
ophelia_crane
29 July 2009 @ 10:42 am
 

Hooray Art!!
 
 
ophelia_crane
27 July 2009 @ 10:30 pm
If you could re-write any myth or legend what would it be and how would you re-write it? [i.e. what would you change and or keep the same?] 

Different time period?

Different endings?

New characters?

Here are some of the responses re-posted from my Facebook wall conversation with Steph and Maegan.

Lainey Welsch

Lainey Welsch I wanted to re-write the Selene and Endymion myth but set it in the future ala sci-fi ish where Selene is from a race of beautiful but rather cold and emotionally distant race, and Endymion was an astronaut of some kind, but that's as far as I've ever gotten with that one. It felt very Ray Bradbury to me.

Also, having been watching the show Merlin, here lately I've been wanting to write my own version of the King Arthur legend...but I don't know how that would work...yet.



 
STEPH'S Response:

 

Stephanie Ferguson I had this idea once of writing a modern scene with an older man and a young woman meeting and talking together in a park in the evening; the older man would have a very large dog; and they would have this interesting, quiet conversation in which they would discover that they were actually very much in sync with each other, but he would be too shy (and sort of self-derogatory) to progress farther than that, and she would like him but get the wrong idea: and they would probably part ways and never see each other again, even though they shouldn't have. maybe. And that was my version of the Persephone/Hades myth. The ending's a bit different, but I never really decided for sure how it would end.

What about you?

 
Lainey Welsch
Lainey Welsch
I love it! It's very sad and sort of sweet at the same time..very much how I imagine Hades and Persephone.

You should write it. :P
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Maegan Mercer-Bourne
Maegan Mercer-Bourne
I love that. One of my friends rewrote this myth. I've always thought it could be taken as very bitter sweet. I think you should write that story. :)
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ophelia_crane
27 July 2009 @ 12:42 pm
I just finished working on a twenty four hour play festival at The Academy Theatre, with Working Title Playwrights, and boy was it a trip.  I didn't participate but just watching fourteen playwrights work together to write seven, awesome hilarious scripts was a great experience as a writer.

Who knows I might even get a wild hair and decide to do one of those myself!

I am almost finished with Act I of  The True History of Henry Rayne and the Airship Pirates! Woot!

Other random writings are in the works as well, and as soon as I can kidnap my partner in crime there will be further Adventures of Lord Peterbrooke and his Man Quincy

Ciao!
 
 
Current Location: Mom's House [laundry day!]
Current Music: Casper soundtrack...
 
 
ophelia_crane
24 June 2009 @ 10:06 pm

"Tap thunk, tap thunk, tap thunk" the sound echoed off the metal bullwarks and piping that paralleled the narrow causeway.  In the dim glow of the work lamps a young woman made her way down the hall, package in hand leaning heavily on a black umbrella with an ivory handle.  She was in her mid twenties with strong yet feminine features of a Gascon nature and long blonde hair in a single braid.  Her vestements spoke of one time richness but were now buried under layers of sweat grease and grime.  Her face was set determinedly as she limped through the labyrinthine passage towards the door in front of her.  The door was half open and bathed the hallway in the amber glow of Phosphorene lamps while just within the perimeter of the doorway a worktable could be seen, strewn about with tools, bits of gadetry and many wine bottles.  Some were full, most were empty.

"Sacre bleu!"  she spat as she stumbled over the threshold of the doorway and into the room sinking gratefully into the chair at the worktable.  Once settled she surveyed her doman.  The room was unremarkable- more of a closet than anything else crammed in between the ship's two engines like a single pendent among cleavage.  The location afforded Lucienne several things: the first being a direct line to the health of her precious engines through the entanglements that made up the walls and ceilings of her cabin.  Second it provided constant warmth through the radiated energy of the engines, and third because this was not a cabin original to the ship it was not on a map-- and not being on a map meant that damn Brit couldn't find her.  That made Lucienne grin, which did not happen very often.

"Oh, damn!" her attention turned back to the package under her arm.  She held it up to the lamp and examined it for a moment before setting it down on the worktable.  She continued to study it as she reached across the table locating one of the few full bottles of wine, uncorked it and proceeded to eye the package with the same wariness one usually affords a rabid badger.

"Damn, damn, damn." More gulping of the wine followed.  Lucienne finished  the bottle and threw it over her shoulder, eyes  still locked on the package.  She placed her hand on the table and with the other began slowly unwrapping the plain brown paper.  After what seemed like an eternity Lucienne found herself staring at a small white gift box with silver filigree on the top.

"Merde," she muttered opening the lid already knowing what lay inside.  All the tension that had built up like a steam in the lines was released in a single sigh.  Lucy held a large silver hair clasp.  It glittered with small diamonds like fireflies in the amber light.  Lucienne stood up gasping a little as she straightened her leg, and threw the hair clasp on the table.  It lay among the rusted bits of metal like a bit of buried treasure in the sand.

"Merde, merde, damn, fils de salope!"  She threw herself down on her bed and blew out the lamps-- she was going to need a lot more wine...and a dress.  Her sister was getting married.


[This is a character from the Captain Stormhaven universe.  She and Winter do not get a long at all (something about that British/French rivalry thing).  I find myself increasingly fascinated with Lucy.  She has come through a lot to get where she is, and she is not afraid to fight to fight for her ideals.  She does have a few skeletons she would rather keep in the closet.  She and Winter are two very interesting characters, very much different and very much the same at the same time.  I am having fun pitting them against each other, on friendly terms that is, they are after all on the same crew!]
 
 
 
Current Mood: mischievous
Current Music: The Letter that Never Came: Series of Unfortunate Events Soundtrack
 
 
ophelia_crane
24 June 2009 @ 12:56 pm
I am very excited about this new project!  I have also poked my friend Stephanie [of HMS Tempest fame!] into doing this with me!  You can find more details HERE.

Three Minute Fiction
 

Submit Your Story

By submitting your original work of fiction, you are agreeing to the rules and terms of agreement of this contest below.

To submit your story, click on the link below. Select "Other" as your subject on the contact form and paste the text of your story in the "Body" field.

 

Example: 'For Sixty Cents'

"For Sixty Cents" is a terse story, just over 200 words, that brings a moment in a Brooklyn coffee shop to life. It's fragmentary and suggestive, like the pieces Wood expects to hear from listeners.

"For Sixty Cents" by Lydia Davis. Copyright Lydia Davis. The story was originally published in Varieties of Disturbance by Lydia Davis (Farrar, Straus & Giroux, 2007) and will also appear in The Collected Stories of Lydia Davis to be published in October 2009 by Farrar, Straus & Giroux.

 

 

About James Wood

James Wood
Miriam Berkley

James Wood has been a staff writer and book critic at The New Yorker since 2007. He was the chief literary critic at the Guardianin London from 1992 to 1995 and a senior editor at The New Republicfrom 1995 to 2007. His critical essays have been collected in two volumes: The Broken Estate: Essays on Literature and Belief(1999) and The Irresponsible Self: On Laughter and the Novel (2004), which was a finalist for the National Book Critics Circle Award. He is also the author of a novel, The Book Against God (2003), and a study of technique in the novel,How Fiction Works (2008). He lives in Boston and teaches half-time at Harvard University, where he is professor of the practice of literary criticism.


 

 

All Things Considered, June 20, 2009 · At NPR, we love to hear, and tell, your real-life stories every day. Now, we want to hear your fiction as well.

This summer, we're beginning a contest called "Three-Minute Fiction." The premise is simple: Listeners send in original short stories that can be read in three minutes or less — that's usually about 500-600 words long.

James Wood, literary critic forThe New Yorker and author of the book How Fiction Works,will serve as NPR's "Three-Minute Fiction" guide. Wood will appear on-air throughout the summer to read his favorite submissions, and we'll also post them here on NPR.org.

Wood tells NPR's Guy Raz that writing a 500-word story "strikes at the very heart of the short story as a project, which is to get something going rapidly." Writing three-minute fiction is good practice. Think, he says, of the masters of the short story, like Anton Chekhov, who began his career writing comic squibs for newspapers.

"This is something that interests all writers, not just short-story writers, but novelists, too," Wood says. "How do you get a character, as it were, into a room and up and going within a sentence or two?"

"One of the most effective ways to get a very short story vivid," he says, "is to think in terms of voice." Maybe the character narrates the story, for example, or perhaps the story is told within the consciousness of the character. "In other words," Wood says, "thinking in terms of the story as a dramatic monologue."

Wood offers a piece by Lydia Davis to show how powerful a very brief short story can be. "For Sixty Cents" is a terse story, just over 200 words, that brings a moment in a Brooklyn coffee shop to life. It's fragmentary and suggestive, like the pieces Wood expects to hear from listeners.

"I'm going to be looking at a writer's ability to suggest a world, rather than to fill it in and dot every i."

Wood's reading of "For Sixty Cents" clocks in at 1 minute, 3 seconds — proof that a good story can be told in three minutes or less.

Now, lend us your imagination.

 
 
Current Location: Mom's House
Current Mood: ecstatic
Current Music: More History Channel...
 
 
ophelia_crane
24 June 2009 @ 12:43 pm
Here are fifteen books that stick with me and I would consider my absolute favorites and have also flavored my writing style in some way:

Les Miserables by Victor Hugo
Peter Pan  by J.M. Barrie
The Ragwitch by Garth Nix
Goblins in the Castle  by Bruce Coville
Peter Pan in Kensington Gardens by J.M. Barrie
The Golden Compass by Phillip Pullman
Captain Blood [which I am reading at the moment, and it's already a favorite!] by Rafael Sabatini
The Martian Chronicles [the most poignant and lonely science fiction I have ever read, beautiful!]  by Ray Bradbury
The Last Unicorn by Peter S. Beagle
Sabriel by Garth Nix
A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens 
The Three Musketeers  by Alexandre Dumas
Treasure Island by Robert Louis Stevenson
Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen
The Chronicles of Prydain [I know technically that cheating because it's a series but, nyah!] by Lloyd Alexander

There are sooooo many more that I could add to this list, but these are ones that I grew up reading and feel that are most ingrained in my writing psyche!  Dang it, now I want to go read instead of working!
 
 
 
Current Location: Mom's House
Current Mood: satisfied
Current Music: History Channel...
 
 
ophelia_crane
21 June 2009 @ 11:01 pm
I haven't been writing much because...

A LOT of things have been happening here recently, some art related some not so art related.  The biggest and most interesting probably being STEAM Fest.  You can read all about it HERE as I am feeling lazy and not wanting to regurgitate all the details here.

 
The biggest success, artistically speaking was the costumes for the characters Caliban and Ariel for the formal staged reading of HMS Tempest that was the highlight of the festival. 
 
 
 Caliban was the first theatrical costuming adventure that made it from initial concept sketch to finished product while retaining most of my originalideas.  Allow me to show you, as it will make much more sense than trying to describe it. 
 
 
 
This makes me happy because usually I have a really difficult time moving from a two dimensional idea to a three dimensional idea.  Ariel was equally exciting to work on although I had less concept sketches to work from and more of it was created as I went.
 
     
 
My favorite piece to make was the headband.  Someone said she looked like a little butterfly with antennas which in hindsight sounds like a strange compliment for a robot, but it works well for the character.
 
From these photos I am working on a watercolor rendition of these two characters because they are my favorites.  I am also working on a few more paintings based of HMS Tempest... but those are still top secret!  I am also working on some more furniture painting for my stepmom's store Inside Out Sautee.  Pictures of that will be forthcoming!
 
And lastly I have been hired by the Sautee Nacoochee Community Center as the scenic artist for their production of Headwaters: Birth, Death, and Places In Between.  This will encompass a lot of woodgraining- I look forward to the challenge!
 
So, as they say onwards and upwards!  

[And some writing will be forthcoming as well I promise!]
 
 
Current Mood: indescribable
 
 
ophelia_crane
03 June 2009 @ 10:52 am
 I keep having strange dreams that involve large houses, of mansion proportions.  Sometimes it starts out there is a large group of people and then it ends up being me, and other times it is a few people and we are searching for something.

One time it was on the side of a snowy mountain and another it was in the middle of a large field in the middle of spring.  I would look for an interpretation, but so many of the little things keep changing...

...I am trying to resist the urge to base a story off of it....perhaps The Pocket Watch Collective could be based out of a large mansion...something else to ponder!

[Because we all know I need more of that!]
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Current Location: Out and About...
Current Mood: excited
Current Music: ambient noise...
 
 
ophelia_crane
30 May 2009 @ 09:01 pm
 Why I am create art:  [again in no particular order, and range from the selfless to the completely selfish just to warn you!]

1.  Because it makes me happy
2.  I want to inspire others.
3.  I want to make others happy.
4.  I want to have my own world that I mold and shape as I please and have at my command.
5.  To keep myself from getting stressed out.
6.  To create a legacy that the world will use to remember me-or at least my family.
7.  To connect to others in a way no language can adequately fulfill.
8.  Because otherwise all these characters in my brain [not to mention Gizmo] would drive me crazy!
9.  I want something to give my children [whenever I have them, that is]
10.  "All beings have a purpose." -Story, from Lady in the Water
11.  To fight insomnia and boredom.

I am sure I will add to this list at some point, but these are the core reasons I create art, writing and music.

Why do you create art?



 
 
Current Mood: peaceful
Current Music: Ella Fitzgerald
 
 
ophelia_crane
30 May 2009 @ 04:49 pm
Here is a list of all the current writing projects I am poking around at [in no particular order!]

1.  La Petite Poisson  [theatre for youth play]
2.  The True History of Henry Rayne and the Airship Pirates [gigantic crazy filled steampunk play of dooooom!]
3.  The Wondrous Escapades of Lord Peterbrooke and His Man Quincy [a bit of silliness really]
4.  Children of Destiny [that novel thing]
5.  Wicked Lamppost [that random character thing]
6.  The Adventures of Captain Stormhaven [that serialized steampunk play-ish thing]
7.  The Jester and the Princess [a short story thing]
8.  Twilight Wood [that other theatre for youth play]
9.  The Curious Cavortings of Carter the Cat [a children's book]
10.  The Pocket Watch Collective and the Land of Wednesdays [don't know yet, but I like the title!]

 
 
 
Current Location: Le Academie du Theatre
Current Mood: amused
Current Music: the hum of the air conditioning...
 
 
ophelia_crane
21 May 2009 @ 10:46 am

Somewhere far away from the rain and gloom of Great Britain, 5'3, Rue Caulaincourt Paris France to be exact, M. Byron de Gateaux was sputtering in rage.  "Sacre bleu!" He ranted waving the newspaper, and stomping around his patisserie.  "M. de Gateaux Gastronomical Delights" was a bustling patisserie of international renown, with M. de Gateaux himself the proud owner of the title 'Meillure Ouvrier de France' and he knew it.  What he did not know is how a blasted foreigner, a Brit of all people, could manage to obtain the front page of Le Figaro, and about some silly South American concoction, nonetheless!  The nerve!  The very idea!  The audacity of such a man, to usurp his headline, out from under his very nose.  "Gyah!!!" was all he had left to say.  "Coming, monsieur!"  A pleasant voice rang out from the back kitchen.  The doors swung open and Elise, a petite but robust young woman of noble Gascon heritage, bustled through with a tray of croissants.  

"I have a new recipe I would like to-"
"Have you seen zis?!" de Gateaux interrupted, as he was often want to do.
"No sir, I have been baking. We need-"

"Zis, zis Brit has found what he calls "ze latest innovation in civilized confectionary." Civilized?! Zose, zose brutes who could not cook ze chicken if it pecked zem in ze nose let alone ze delicate confections of mon dessert! Ze crispness of ze tarte tatin, ze subtle sensualite' of l'eclairs, and le choux a la creme zat you could float an angel on! Mon dieu!!!"

Elise sighed, it was no use when le chef got worked up like this.  While he continued stamping like a mad bull, she plucked the newspaper from his hands and glanced at the article.  While the clear thinking practical side of her brain wanted to read more, her national loyalty got the best of her and she snorted through her nose, and tossed the paper in the nearby wastebasket. 

"Who ever heard of zis chocolate? Hmmph!  Sir-we need to finish ze Fauchelevant order before nine! Zey want your new cream puffs!" She bustled after de Gateaux, only pausing a moment to look back at the wastebasket.  This Lord Peterbrooke would certainly prove an interesting adversary...

[Suffice to say, my partner in crime and I have no idea where this is going.  Alright, that is a lie-we have a little idea of where it's going, but I rather like the idea of just getting together, throwing ideas around and then scribbling something whether or not it makes sense to the overall plot.  We shall see where this experiment takes us!]


 
 
Current Location: Chambodia
Current Mood: Clean
Current Music: Liv Kristine
 
 
 
 

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